Monday, March 7, 2011

Ahh..Yes... Love..


When

The spring of love dies..

What remains are just

Sand and stone

I wonder..

What becomes of the undercurrent?

6 comments:

  1. If the spring love dies...so shall the undercurrent for one cannot exist without the other.

    ...interesting
    you made me think
    :)

    Love this!

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  2. thanks hope. But what i feel is that the undercurrent lacks enough force to show itself to the surface:-).

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  3. anything to do with the fallen 'petals'?

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  4. oh deepu.. I've been mouthing those words since i saw them,. Dropped petals are lost forever,. Ha ha:)

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  5. thoughtful lines
    still thinking what becomes
    fish or thought or human

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  6. dear sm,↲A dead river bed awaits for its perennial waters,. And the life returns, waters, fish, lillies and all.. but memories have to be forgotten, quick and complete, for human mind to start fresh and rejuvinate itself,. Lingering thoughts keeps the bed always dry and lifeless,. I never hoped to be this much pessimistic,.:-)

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