Monday, April 11, 2011

Irrepressible - heat or breeze?

                  Lashing droplets..
          Fierce upon barren earth
   pregnant dark clouds empty their load
bartering the swelter to a new found breeze
                summer showers..

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              Sultry, sulky
     Simmering ,sweltering, scorching
       Distant horizon craves again
Don't know whether these two equate to a cinquain..hope should clarify..
I'm off on a  vacation..So may not post anything for sometime..
And my son to his grandparent's house,, I feel like a distant horizon craving for rain...
But could the cool breeze too  mock someone? very frequently used in tamil cinema songs..
I chanced to see this anecdote in a pasuram by tirumangai azhwar...
 காரும் வார் பனிக் கடலும், அன்னவன் 
தாரும்  மார்வமும் கண்ட தண்டமோ?
சோரு மாமுகில் துளியினூடு வந்து 
ஈர வாடைதான் ஈரும் என்னையே 

திருமங்கை ஆழ்வார் 

The breeze is laced with droplets cold..
Of the showers somewhere, from the distant clouds.
Its coldness clamping my soul, my being,
Reminding his nature, the iciness pervading
Mocking my heart, desiring his form
Of deep blue sea, and of thunderstorm..

thirumangai azhwar...
தமிழ் புத்தாண்டு வாழ்த்துக்கள் for all hose who celebrate tamil new year..
and happy vishu for our friends from west coast...


  1. This was lovely, I enjoyed the read very much.

    Thanks for your comment.

  2. these are really nice, adithyasaravan I believe that is a cinquain. I only learned that form recently so I'm no expert. I find them fun to do.

    lovely photo!

    have a wonderful holiday!

  3. Try to enjoy from your vacation
    you and your wife need rest !!!
    You both deserve it .....

    Very lovely words today
    you are very crative with words

    Hugs for all from us
    Kareltje =^.^= ♥ Betsie >^.^<

  4. leaves and petals are still fresh and watery from the rains last evening...
    and how nice it s was to get some rain after the sunny days... u got the same mood in words here..

    happy Vishu to you both :)

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